Travel abroad, stimulating by another countries culture and enjoy the different exoticism, it's the activities that people always want to do. This kind of activities normally occur in winter or summer vacation, because it may take you one week or even one month to finish, when you make up your mind to travel to another countries, you may have two way to choose, one is backpacking and the other is tour travel, but what different between those two ways?
When you do not prepare well and you don't know where you should go, tour travel will be your best choice, you give yourself to a travel service and let them help you to arrange your route of travel, they will imagine it thoughtfully, and take you to many place, but the route of travel usually very hurry, you may stay in the same place for less than ten minutes.
Backpacking has much different with tour travel, you must collect a lot of information about the country you prepare to go, imagining each kind of things that perhaps happen, and for sure that you can come back safe and sound, but it has a greatest merit, that is you can play with happy and unrestrained, you can go to many place that you want to go with your best friend, nobody will limit you, after understand the different between two ways, I believe that you can find the most appropriate way for your travel. Hope you are having a great holiday.
Some of your points are quite nice. I like the short example you used to support your point although there are mistakes in this sentence:'but the route of travel usually very hurry, you may stay in the same place for less than ten minutes.' In addition, I can tell you tried to use some nice vocabulary in your work, like 'stimulated' and 'thoughtfully'.
回覆刪除However, Tom, besides all the compliments above, I need you to work on your command of long sentences. For instance, the sentence from lines 3 to 7 is way too long! You need to learn how and when to break your long sentences into smaller ones so as to help your reader get your points more easily. Another scary and long sentence found is from line 8 to line 13. Please fix them! :)